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: haiku (practised predator) by Debra White
Haiku - Reptiles writing prompt entry

practised predator
lurks beneath murky surface
hungry eyes protrude


Writing Prompt
Create a haiku about a reptile or reptiles.


17 syllables OR LESS

short-long-short format

two INTERCONNECTED lines of concrete imagery followed by satori

title must be haiku(first line of poem)

minimal punctuation and capitalization - only for proper names

PERSONIFICATION WELCOME this time

ARTWORK WELCOME

Author Notes
Many thanks to WendyG at FanArtReview for the perfect picture of Ali's Eye.

     

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