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a haiku about fly fishing
haiku (line loops out and hangs) by RodG
haiku "water" writing prompt entry

line loops out and hangs
one slow breath above the stream
rainbow trout awaits


Writing Prompt
Write a haiku on the subject of water.

17 syllables OR LESS
(Does NOT have to be 5-7-5 syllables)
3 lines (short/long/short)
Present tense
Two grammatically interconnected lines of concrete imagery in lines 1 and 2, and a satori (moment of insight) in line 3
No caps (except proper names, etc.)
Minimal punctuation
Personification allowed (attributing human qualities to animal or object)
ARTWORK WELCOMED
Title like this: haiku (first line)

Author Notes
picture courtesy of Google images

Fly fishing is a real art. I only hope I give you a sense of what a perfect cast is like.

     

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