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Bookend Sequel - A pair of ABC poems
Questions and Answers by kiwisteveh
Bookend It! A Poetry Sequel writing prompt entry



Original poem posted as "Unravelled"
 Feb 8th 2014

Question the Maker and fight for the Ball;
Race round the Clock-face from cradle to pall;
Snatch at the Roses that die as they fall,
'Til Love, the Great Leveller, renders us small
And Time, the Unraveller, does for us all.

 
Sequel (Bookend)
 
 
Questions are answered; no more they devour.

Rose petals fall in a sweet-scented shower.

Stopped are the Clock-faces; now is the hour.

The Maker surrounds us with Love like a flower

And Time the Unraveller loses his power.


 


Writing Prompt
A Poetry Sequel
Write a poem to "pair-up" with a poem you have previously posted.
See full promt for rules and examples

Reviewers: Please review only the new (not previosly posted) poem. Original poem is for reference only.

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