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A much modified triolet
Looking Back by Peter@Poole


One day I walked the beach we knew,
recalled our walking hand in hand,
with gulls and waders in full view.

Again, I walked the beach we knew,
and saw our life in fond review,
a life that many years had spanned.

How good to walk the beach we knew,
which of life's fabric formed a strand.



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Author Notes
Well, I intended to write a triolet, but it cried out for modification.

     

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