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A woman so lonely and abandoned by her child
Invisible me by Jackarrie
    Lonely Poem Contest Winner 



Invisible

nothing but vague memories

the loveliness of my youth

gold has turned to grey

eyes that once shone with ardent fervour

now only shine with pools of tears

sadness that won't leave

like you did my Baby

I love you

oh how I need you

to knock on my door

give me your now grown arms

make me visible again

Please.

Mom

 


Writing Prompt
Write a free verse poem to express the state of loneliness in not more than 15 lines.
Lonely Poem
Contest Winner

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Author Notes
This is a very real situation for many old people who the Grown children that never call or write to see how their parents are keeping, The loneliness is the worst to deal with.

     

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