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 ………………………..*Birds*……………………………................
………………………*.gliding.*……………………………................
……………………..*....on a.....*………....*Have*.………………….
……………………*.stream.*…..*………*.beauty.*………………
………....*…….*of*…….....*…..*….*..that's.*……………..
………......*...*..air*……………*…….....*beyond.*……………
…………....*…..*……………………………..*compare*…………..
……………………………….............................*.............*……….
………………………………................................*............*..*..*..
………………………..*Their*……………………….*.........*.......
……………………..*feathered*……………………………..............
……………………*....curves*……….......*..Are.*…………………
…………………..*and*…..*……......*beautiful*……………..
………*……....*mustache*……...*……**..when...*……………
………..**.bows..*………………*…….....*...seen....*……………
………..*……*…………………………….......*...below.*………….
……………………………….............................*.............*……….
………………………………................................*............*..*..*
 ……………………….*The*………………………….*.......*........
……………………..*.lovely..*…………………………….......................
……………………*...forms*…………..*They*………………….
…………………*..present..*…..*………*...rule...*……………….
………*……...*...such..*………..*….*….*....the*……………..
……….*….* grace*……………….*…….....*...blue..*……………
…………*…..*………....................................*....of….*…………..
……………………………….............................*Heaven's*…………
………………………………...............................*..Space...*..*..*….
……………………….*Flared*.................................*..........*........
 ……………………..*..wings..*……………………………......................
…………………….*..set. in.a...*………....*Do*………………….
…………………*...cobalt...*…..*………*....so...*……………….
………*……...*...sky...*………...*….*….*enchant*……………..
……….*….* .........*……………...*…….....*...the....*……………
…………*…..*………...................................*.human*…………..
……………………………….............................*....eye...*…………
………………………………...............................*............*..*..*….
……………………………….....................................*........*........
 


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Author Notes

This didn't need an image,but everytime I turn around Fan Story has added an image on the oppening page that has nothing to do with the poem. I thought it might be confusing to the reader so I finally added an image of my own.

When I first heard of shape poems I wanted to do one, BUT I didn't like the fact they looked like a clumpy bunch of words that had little resemblence towhat they were suppose to represent. I wanted to create something prettier...so I created a different look. I call these designer poems, because you REALLY have to design them. I write the poem to completely stand on its own without the shape. I create the shape independently, then place the words in the design. It takes a bit of formating time to get things right, but I enjoy doing it. Im the past I have done a balleria, snowman, butterfly, tulup, spider web, snowflake, Christmas tree and a bubbling champagne glass.

Those of you who write in the alternative editor know how Evil Eddie ( the pet name for that editor) can wreck havoc on your work. He can be a royal pain!!!

I haven't done one of these for about a year and a half...didn't know if I still could! LOL I hope you enjoy the poem and my birds in flight.
If your wondering why I desscribed the shapes as mustaches in my poem, it because I thought the birds kind of resembled them...and that's in REAL life as well.

Thanks for stoppping by....I hope you enjoy!
:o) Helvi

     

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