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New dawn entangles sullen night by kiwisteveh
Triolet Poetry Contest contest entry

New dawn entangles sullen night.
With silken threads of fine-spun gold.
Dark shadows deep are put to flight;
New dawn entangles sullen night.

So doth your love's life-giving light
Set free my heart from wintry cold.
New dawn entangles sullen night
With silken threads of fine-spun gold.

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Author Notes
A triolet consistes of 8 lines with a rhyme scheme of abaaabab The most striking feature is the repetition of key lines. Line 1 is repeated as line 4 and line 7 Line 2 is repeated as line 8
I have used iambic tetrameter

     

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