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Sedoka contest; my first attempt
Men and Their Machines by justjo66
Sedoka Poem writing prompt entry

Men and their machines
Saturday morning exchange
World affairs being managed

Sun rising up high
Mowing still needs to be done
World affairs will have to wait


Writing Prompt
Write a sedoka poem. A sedoka consists of two unrhymed three-line stanzas, each with a syllable count of 5 - 7 - 7.
Often these stanzas go at the same subject from different perspectives, but that is not a requirement.

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Author Notes
I couldn't resist taking a picture of my husband and neighbor "chewing the fat" one Saturday morning. :o)

     

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