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a monchielle - see author's notes
When I Fly to Heaven by adewpearl
    The Monchielle Contest Winner 


When I fly to Heaven,
my God will embrace me
despite my flaws and sin.
He will open His arms
and gather me within.

When I fly to Heaven,
I will meet my mother,
who's missed me all these years,
and I will know at last
sweet freedom from my tears.

When I fly to Heaven,
I will speak with Jesus
when I am home again.
From these Fields of Glory,
you'll hear me shout Amen.

When I fly to Heaven,
I'll sing Hallelujah
with angels in the sky,
and we'll greet you gladly
when you come by and by.

The Monchielle
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Author Notes
The monchielle is a poem consisting of four five line stanzas where the first line repeats in each verse. Each line consists of six syllables, and lines three and five rhyme. The form was created by Jim T. Henriksen.
This contest allows no author's notes except for these rules.

     

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