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reflections in cinquain form
cinquains
: Seek and Ye Might Find by adewpearl
    Write a traditional cinquain Contest Winner 


Grabbing
for the brass ring
can yield a high return -
my fingers clasped but only caught
iron.



Writing Prompt
A cinquain is a five line poem with a syllabic count of 2/4/6/8/2. There is a turn at the last line or immediately before it. The poem should be titled and the title should work in as part of the poem. Only poems of five lines allowed; no multiple stanzas cinquains. Iambic meter preferred, but not required. No pictures, please; create the picture with your poem.
Write a traditional cinquain
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Author Notes
Carousels in the late 19th and early 20th Centuries often featured a chance for those sitting on the outside circle to reach out and grab a ring. Most of the rings were iron, but at least one was brass. If a lucky person grabbed a brass ring, he or she could exchange it for a prize. This is the origin of the phrase, Grab for the brass ring, which means to live life to the fullest.

The cinquain is a poem with syllable count of 2/4/6/8/2. In the tradition of Adelaide Crapsey, who originated the form in the 19th Century, it often features a downward turn in the final or penultimate line. There is always a title, which should act as a significant sixth line.

     

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