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: My Peaceful Place by adewpearl


When chaos reigns, I seek inside
my peaceful place,
an inner calm that slows my stride
from frantic pace,
a voice that counsels soothing rest
instead of courting one last quest --
a restoration to embrace,
my peaceful place.

Anxiety can be denied
if we replace
our grasp for goals that soon collide,
with gentle grace.
Tranquility will not elude
a soul who welcomes quietude.
I've made my choice and left the chase --
my peaceful place.


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The octogram is a poetic form invented by Fanstorian Sally Yocom in 2009. It consists of two 8 line verses. Each has a syllable count of 8/4/8/4/8/8/8/4. The rhyme scheme is ABABCCBB ABABDDBB. Line 2 of the first verse is repeated as a refrain in line 8 of the first verse and line 8 of the second verse.

     

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