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Quaterns: Observations on Life
: As Snow Upon the Evergreen by adewpearl
    First and last sentence the same Contest Winner 

As snow upon the evergreen
paints every bough a pearly white,
each crystal sparkles clear and clean
when struck by shafts of winter light.

What other landscape seems so bright
as snow upon the evergreen
or brings the soul such sheer delight
as found within this tranquil scene?

Unspoiled and spotless, so pristine,
this peaceful world seems pure and right
as snow upon the evergreen
falls softly down to end its flight.

As still of day turns silent night,
I know that I have never seen
more radiant or calm a sight
as snow upon the evergreen.



Writing Prompt
Write a 16-line rhyming poem about nature, where the first and last lines are the same.
The 16 linest can be one stanza, or 4 stanzas of 4 sentences, or 8 stanzas of 2 sentences.

First and last sentence the same
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Author Notes
The quatern is a poem of four quatrains in which the first line of the first verse becomses the second line of the second verse and the third line of the third verse and finally the final line of the last verse. It is a rhyming poem, but the particular rhyme scheme is optional.

     

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