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    Lune Poetry Contest Winner 


wrinkles, creaking bones

old as dirt--

what the hell happened?



Writing Prompt
Write a Lune - A three-line poem of 13 syllables. The first and last lines contain 5 syllables each, and the center line only 3. Set out as 5/3/5. See an example in the announcement.
Lune Poetry
Contest Winner

Recognized

Author Notes
Thank you, Country Photos, for sharing your artwork titled, "Man of Character"--I love this guy's face!!

Thank you Josipher for sponsoring this contest.

A lune poem, created by Robert Kelly, is called an American variation of haiku. He felt the 5-3-5 syllables were closer to Japanese haiku when using the English language. Unlike traditional haiku, lune poetry may be titled, may rhyme, can have metaphors or similes, can be in the past or present, can be about any topic, and can be serious or silly. It should however, be written as a complete thought.

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Indy :>)

     

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