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: Temporary Setback by adewpearl


Black disc
in morning sky --
the sun obscured from sight,
until the light comes shining bright
again.


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Author Notes
shining bright or shining back
Dear fellow writers, I'd really appreciate if you'd weigh in on which you like better as I keep going back and forth. :-) Brooke

     

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