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He's a bumblebee
My New Friend by damommy

I watched a bumblebee
enjoy the blossoms new.
He hovered o’er each bloom
and gave each one its due.
It was a joy to see.
 
He found his own lunch room
and had it to himself
while working very hard,
a black and yellow elf,
when finished, off he zoomed.
 
But first, flew ‘cross the yard
and lit upon my chair.
My heart was full of glee,
I loved he landed there,
few seconds, dropped his guard.

 

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Author Notes
Entwined Form consists of three or more trimeter quintets, usually in Iambic where the 3rd line of each stanza rhymes with the first line of the following stanza, until the final stanza which rhymes with the first line of the poem.

Rhyme pattern: abcba cdedc efafe

     

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