Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted March 22, 2018


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Love makes a man crazy

Love and Logic

by Pamusart

The love that is tidy can never exist
He can't control logic while locked in a kiss
When she came along, he surrendered his past
What used to be real was unable to last

His mind has been blinded by her, his new crush
He feels so excited and life's such a rush
He cares not for food, he's just barely alive
He knows that without her, he'll never survive


She makes him so crazy, his mind's in a vise
The rest of his life is now paying the price



Love Poem Poetry Contest contest entry


Can head-over-heels romantic new Love and Logic co-exist?

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