General Poetry posted February 6, 2018


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Dodging life, I would say

Reality Amiss

by Lulube


Nothing more than a joke
And I know you know it
You don't want to show it
'specially to those you know

You're like a colored mat
Only you don't lie flat
Though you always roll it
Roll it on down with the flow

You're like a fleeing day
Hiding, waiting for night
In darkness, crouched in fright
Not wanting your face to show

Hope you find some courage
So your life can flourish
Take your body forward
With your mind behind, in tow







I made this style up, it's 2 verses that interlock but with different rhyming schemes
1st verse - 6-6-6-7, a,b,b,c
2nd verse - 6-6-6-7, a, a, b, c
repeat 1 and 2
all "C" lines, the last word rhymes throughout each verse
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