General Poetry posted January 15, 2018


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sadness can be poison

Drowning in Sorrow

by Rhonni

Oh, this sorrow
it smells like burning sulfar
it tastes like a poisonous elixor
it sounds like a hollow jungle
it feels like a tight vise-grip
it looks like an ominous shadow
Sorrow is a lonesome guest.

                                 


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