Fantasy Fiction posted December 31, 2017

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A 100 suspenseful story :P

Heaven or Hell?

by Rasmine

I walked down the street marveling at the gold paint. 

If it was paint!  After all, this is Heaven. Funny, I made it to Heaven – joke's on all jerkos that said I would end up in the pit of Hell. 

I jump for joy, then run up these pearly shined stairs.  I stop as a man comes out in a bright, white robe.
“I am sorry, Louie, but with all your, um, sinful discretions, you are in the wrong place.”

“What? Wrong place!  You must be kidding!”

Suddenly, the floors open and I fall to wake up surrounded by fire. 

100 Word Flash Fiction contest entry

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Artwork by David Ruhl at

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