General Poetry posted December 10, 2017


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Horse Sense

by dragonpoet

There was something different about that one night
Human visitors to our stable came,
the woman riding on an ass,
because everywhere answer was the same
No room for anyone in any inn in sight.

That family had a certain inner strength and grace
around them a fullness of living faith
that outshone the stars in the sky
for although the parents seemed wayward wraiths
a light of peace radiated from the babe's face.

It seemed to me, just a single minded draft horse,
That I was given a new understanding
That this child was someone special
and that he'd find a humble way of leading
us living beings to a more giving life course.








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style--symmetrina--invented by FS writer pantygynt
The topic for the Symmetrina , is to write a first person Symmetrina from the POV of one of the animals in that Bethlehem stable. Any adaptation of the traditional Christmas story will do and I don't suppose the ox, ass and sheep were the only animals there, be as original as you wish, you rats and roaches. The symmetrina stanza is five lines long.



1. Line one, An Alexandrine Hexameter (a line of 12 syllables). The 'a' rhyme.
2. Line two, a pentameter (a line of 10 syllables or 11 sylables if it has a feminine ending. The 'b' rhyme.
3. Line three, a tetrameter (a line of 8 syllables or nine syllables if it has a feminine ending. The 'c' rhyme.
4. Line four, as for line two. The 'b' rhyme. [10syls.]
5. Line five, as for line one. The 'a' rhyme [12 syls.].
~~May have as many verses as you wish.~~
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