Romance Poetry posted November 29, 2017 Chapters:  ...25 26 -27- 28... 


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Free verse

A chapter in the book Natural Light

Candlelight

by estory

Whispering figures
Dance in the shadows
Where a candle
Flickers
Into music,
Movement

In the shadows,
Shapes:

A woman's body
In a man's hand

Where shadows dreaming lightly
Seem almost silent,
Still;

A charcoal sketch of lovers
Speaking softly

In whispers of light,
Silhouettes embracing
In a pale tongue of flame
Like fingertips
On skin

In darkness
Whispers
The light,

Flickering, wavering
In silhouettes
Embracing

A whisper of light
On the pale wall,
Dancing




This is a free verse poem of repeating patterns of words and sounds, lots of soft 's' sounds, and hazy images that suggest an impressionistic sketch of lovers in a dark room. Hints and impressions make up the beauty here, and I wanted to keep it abstract enough to be interpreted in many ways by different people. estory
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