General Poetry posted November 19, 2017 |
fusion sonnet
he said He said (they heard Him too)
by michaelcahill
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Not sure how close this is to a Fusion Sonnet, but I wanted to rant a bit about the topic, so ...
The topic is "Disease".
I don't know what the disease is called that causes people to support a child molester like Roy Moore, but whatever it is ... a lot of people have it, including supposed people of God. Disgusting and disheartening.
The challenge this week is to write a Fusion Sonnet.
Tom Reischel (Treischel) posted this one recently. The form was devised by a guy called Sonnet Modal and falls under the auspices of the Modern Sonnet genre. As such, it breaks several Traditional Sonnet rules. Most notably, it has 21 Lines rather than the typical 14. The Fusion comes from blending in 4 lines of Free Verse at lines 11 through 14. It has a strict Structure and Rhyme Scheme, but is more flexible in the area of Meter where the lines may be as here of variable length. The rhythm however, apart from the free verse section, should be iambic throughout. Here are the complex rules:
14 line Poem followed by a Half Sonnet of 7 lines acting as a Coda or Tail to add additional stability to the poem. No particular Meter is followed, "Fusing" it with the modern Free Verse style.
First Fourteen Lines:
Same Rhyme in 1st,5th,9th & 10th Lines.
Same Rhyme in 2nd,3rd & 4th Lines.
Same Rhyme in 6th,7th & 8th lines. So: A1 b b b A2 c c c,
Rhetorical questions in 9th & 10th lines.
Negative and pessimistic note in the first 10 lines.
Free Verse in 11th, 12th,13 & 14th Lines. Relates back to something similar.
* * * * *
Line 15 repeats line 1.
Next Seven Lines:-The Half Sonnet, acting as a Coda.
Same Rhyme in 16th and 17th lines.
Same Rhyme in 18th and 19th lines.
Line 20 and 21 repeats line 1 and 5. (modified slightly if you wish.)
So overall: In negative mood (A1 b b b A2 c c c,), Rhetorical questions (a? a?), Free verse (x x x x), @L14 the coda resolves the situation (A1 d d e e A1 A2).
Club entry for the "Poetry Potlatch 10-18-2017" event in "Put Pen To Paper Potlatch Poetry Club". Locate a writing club.
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