Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted November 17, 2017


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A lesson I had to learn (free verse)

Let Others Get Joy From Serving

by patcelaw



As I began to suffer from back pain
I had help from many loving friends
I didn't know how I could repay
their kindness to me in my need.

Then the Lord clearly showed me
I did not have to repay them at all
but to thank them, letting them know
how grateful I felt deep within.

For years I had been the one to give
and took much joy in that giving
now the Lord is showing me
to let others be blessed by giving.


-Patricia Lawrence
11-17-17



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The problems with my back and my eyesight have required me to accept help from others. I had always been a helping and serving one, and to have to accept help was a hard lesson for me to learn. I still need a lot of help and it will be just a few months and I will be living with my oldest daughter and her husband. I am so grateful that I have a home which I will be welcomed into.
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