General Poetry posted November 4, 2017


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God's Feathered Warrior

by mermaids

God's feathered warrior
peeks in my window
his eyes request
bird seed,
his gray-white feathers
move towards heaven

he chases away
a bluejay
allowing a
chickadee to
dine with him

he motions for
the bluejay to
return
sunflower seeds
disappear

the young dove
perches like
a noble soldier
at his post



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I have quite a few doves that hang around my house and yard. Some of them sit on my window feeder, peering into my kitchen.
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