General Poetry posted November 4, 2017


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A Cherita poem

A Pan of Toffee

by Giddy Nielsen-Sweep



A group of trainees

Cooking sweets
in the nurse's home

A beach trip is suggested
we drive in bikinis
and take the pan of toffee too

 


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Thank you, Liilia for your terrific artwork, Old Kitchen

Consists of six lines in three verses
first, one line
second, two lines
third, three lines

This Malaysian form was invented by Ai Li 20 years ago this year. Check out her flipbook online. Brevity is so important, and the poem should tell a story. It can be about anything, but should restrain from harsh language or profanity.
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Artwork by Liilia at FanArtReview.com

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