General Fiction posted October 30, 2017


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Sneaky Snacks

Rustling Sounds

by doggymad


"Did you hear that noise?" asked Podge as he tilted his head to listen more intently.

Rodge opened one eye and groaned loudly at his brother.
"What is it with you Podge, you are always hearing things?"

"Hush up bro, there it is again. I recognise that sound, surely you can hear it now."

"Hey, Podge, I take it back, you are one smart individual. I can't believe it though. I never thought mom would open a packet of peanuts without our permission. Let's go get her before she swallows the lot."




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