General Poetry posted October 29, 2017


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The way I am about that girl.

Natural Feelings

by Aaron Whitaker

Like the peeking of light shine through the leaves of the oak,

I feel the warmth of you

As the breeze of the ocean kicks salt into the air, you spread the love around

Some thing not to be shored by the current of life and issues to be aware by the thoughts of one to another we share.

Days will pass and nights will fall but to the eyes and hearts of the lover one could be all.

As an oak grows from the sunlight and water of nature I grow from you the love and power within the words you share.



A.W



As you read through this again try imagining or picturing a loved one whether boyfriend/girlfriend and relate this to how you really feel about him/her and let them know.
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