General Poetry posted October 24, 2017


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When you are about to forget

You Will Be Gone

by Allyzeé

I see you there
Between the shadows
Underneath the earth,
I see you there
A tiny figure
What a pitiful sight,
You are here
And yet you are gone;
I see you there
When night time comes.

Yes
I see You there,
And it does not matter
Because the tiny space
That in my heart you occupy;
Is now here
But soon
It will not.


Repetition Poem writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem where the same line is repeated at least three times in the poem.


I think I wrote this poem in a time when I was about to forget some one, those times when that person doesn't matter for you any more, but at the same time, there is this tiny part of your heart that from time to time it longs and remembers.
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