Romance Poetry posted October 12, 2017


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Morning swim

I surrender

by DR DIP

I SURRENDER

I surrender to the morning waves
I surrender every day
It's what every swimmer craves
No words I need to say

I surrender to my beach, Cronulla,
That sunrise on Bate Bay
Will never crave for any other
It's my paradise, I wanna stay

Silhouetted by the morning sun
We stand, take in the view
Could stay here till day is done
Savouring the days so blue

So hands up to my favourite place
A place I'll always cherish
Don't think I could ever replace
My town that I embellish

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This shot was taken by local photographer Michael Sutton of another morning sunrise at my home beach of Cronulla. His photos always inspire me to write about them.

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