General Poetry posted October 9, 2017


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A vision to be saved

A postcard moment

by astyanax


That Indian summer
In the fancy work of nature
Hues igniting the dusk mixture
A fire in the ether

Burning the horizon
Slow motion phoenix like in a trance
Over the glitz ashes in the ocean
A bird suspended in the expanse

On that hypnotical painting
A spread of dissipated clouds
In a reddish glow came extending
A moment stolen from a postcard

As the afternoon began to translate
The colors that brushes the mystify
The hours getting late
Stroked an Olympian sky

The evening after a while
Preparing for the moonlight
Had the mountain aligned
A silhouette of the night

The stars in constellation casted
The sparks twinkling the gods' eyes
Pushing the last of the geoluread contrast
Closer to bade the golden sand good bye

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