Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted September 24, 2017


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Feeling a wicked heart

by DR DIP

FEELING A WICKED HEART

You can feel a wicked heart
Or one not really pure
Got to feel it from the start
It could be just demure

You can feel a hateful soul
A terrible love within
They'll always try to control
A love; don't let it begin

You can sense a loving person
Whose intentions are all true
The ones who bring such joy
Like you always wanted to

A wicked heart or a pure soul
You sometimes never know
What virtues they might bring
If your love's to really grow

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I wrote this poem 10 mins ago after reading Kerry Robinson's post about the fortune teller. Please read Kerry's post to see what inspired this poem.
NB note the mixed rhyme scheme of ABAB and ABCB ( verse3and 4) as long as line s 2 and 4 have the same rhyme pattern when read it matters not in the context of this poem.
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