General Poetry posted September 23, 2017


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A Bum, A Brother

by victortouche

Same clothes
as yesterday,
last week,
last month,
last year.

Dirty
Dishonest (you can tell)
Shuffling
Bearded

Yup, you know...
A Bum.

Kinda disheveled his way
up to my parking lot.
I was in a hurry.
In my car.

You know, important.
Like you.

Well, pedestrians have
the right of way,
you know-
sidewalk and all.

So, I stopped.
So, he stopped.
I waved him ahead.
No, he waved me ahead.

He won the waving contest.

I pulled right in and parked.
As I got out, I thought...
He probably has just made it
across my parking lot.

I decided to be
one hell of a guy.
So, I hailed him-
"Thanks for being so polite."

He looked up,
mumble, mumble, mumble.

I said, "Hey, thanks for waving me on in."

He looks at me and says,
"Ain't that the way
the world's s'pposed to be?"

Well, that...just
stopped me in my tracks.

"Why, yes sir, it most certainly is."

He replied, "You're a nice fella.
Have a wonderful day."

"You too," I said.

He smiled slightly,
started shuffling again
as if...not bound by time,
and said,

"I always do."

As I entered my office,
a quick, strange, thought
jumped out at me.

Something I thought
my gut
would never say to me.

Did I...just...talk with Christ?



Recognized


So profound the aura of
complete tranquility about him.
Answers that just floored me.
Answers not from a Bum.
The last reply...somehow like he was gigggling inside-
will he get it?

"I always do." That is simply goose bump raising, not a Bum's answer. And I am not really a believer. A fence-sitter at best.
But this was -I can't explain.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.

Artwork by cleo85 at FanArtReview.com

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