Self Improvement Poetry posted September 23, 2017


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An Unrhymed Loop Poem

Alphabet- Loop (A-Z)

by kahpot

All around the world people have to become
Become one with Mother, She needs a chance
Chance to restore from years of devastation
Devastation unwanted on God's given earth
Earth is our home and cannot be forsaken
Forsaken for greed will cost future ground
Ground we must stand and fight with faiths help
Help to regain our being of importance
Importance of mankind passed on by Jesus
Jesus has given his life and his kingdom
Kingdom of peace for the children He loved
Loved without prejudice for the life of mankind
Mankind He bestowed, our place to nurture
Nurture and grow, and for all to own
Own with pride in both us and our planet
Planet now crying, her tears we must quit
Quit can't be an option for breath is our reason
Reason for living while many have strength
Strength even stronger when tethered together
Together as one we must grow united
United we'll see there's only one vision
Vision of creation and our role within
Within a world of scars not yet x-rayed
X-rayed for a cure to heal bleeding youth
Youth can't be left to endure ground zero
Zero would mean the end of it all

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Thank lynnkah for the artwork
I first posted this in 2017 my first year on FS.
I have done some edits learned from what I have learned
here, thank you all for your ongoing help and encouragement
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Artwork by lynnkah at FanArtReview.com

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