Self Improvement Poetry posted September 23, 2017


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No rhyme just practising

Alphabet- Loop

by kahpot

All around the world people have to become
Become one with Mother, Earth needs a chance
Chance to restore from years of devastation
Devastation unwanted on God's given earth
Earth is our Mother she can't be forsaken
Forsaken or lost, will lose peoples' ground
Ground and people who survive nature's hell
Hell can't replace our being or importance
Importance of mankind passed on by Jesus
Jesus has given his sight and his kingdom
Kingdom he gave for peace and for love
Love for our planet, earth, and mankind
Mankind was bestowed a place to nurture
Nurture for all and for all to own
Own for life, both ours and our planet
Planet we've ignored whose willing to quit
Quit on our help while seeing no reason
Reason we failed when many are strong
Strong we can be if we band together
Together as one we must stand united
United we'll see there's only one vision
Vision of importance to restore our world
World with a future if properly x-rayed
X-rayed for vision to help our youth
Youth can't be left to meet ground zero
Zero will end their chance to become


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Wanted to try something different, I have tried an Acrostic and an Acrostic- Loop combo, so this is my first Loop, all help greatly appreciated
For the challenge, I have used all the letters of the alphabet downwards (hope there in order)****kahpot
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