Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted September 19, 2017


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She is a child

by DR DIP

SHE IS A CHILD

She is a child
She looks at the world through innocent eyes
She is oblivious
Oblivious to this world of hate and despair
She is happy
Happy in knowing she has a loving family
She is naive
Naive to a world of tricksters

He is a father
Overjoyed at the birth of his beautiful daughter
He looks at the world with wisdom
He is experienced in life
Experienced with righting the mistakes he's made
He is hopeful
Hopeful that he has given his little girl a chance in life
He is a realist
Realizes that his girl will face many obstacles
He will always be there for her

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Just trying a bit of free verse for a change. Not my usual style just thought I'd give it a go

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