Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted September 8, 2017


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For a wounded soldier

I'll never give up on you

by DR DIP



I'LL NEVER GIVE UP ON YOU

I know your heartache, I know your pain
But I'll never give up on you
I see your sadness through tears like rain
But together we'll see this through

We've experienced the bad times together
But also the good times as well
If life is a storm we've taken all weather
We've ridden that rising swell

But I'll never give up on you my sweet
Don't think anyone really will
You're always smiling even in defeat
And we all love you still

I write this not in sympathy
I write it because I care
Compassion is my empathy
I guess you are aware

Life, it can be so cruel I know
How does God make this selection?
He'll know when it's time to go
But he's there for your protection

So hang in there my wounded soldier
The battle will never be lost
We all love you, I've already told ya
The coin's not landed, though tossed

dip



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I have a really good Facebook friend who is going through some major health issues that will eventually kill her prematurely among many afflictions, she has a disease of the blood where it produces far too much iron and continually has to have blood transfusions the resultant effect is severe arthritis of ALL joints in the body. lack of sleep serious loss of weight and a myriad of others yet she still remains positive about her life. I'll never complain about my health again she is such an inspiration in the face of adversity.
Dip
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