Self Improvement Poetry posted September 3, 2017


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Frustration.

A Wall Scrawl.

by Sankey

For quite some time I had a problem

Drove me up the wall.  

No matter how much thought I gave it,

I could not solve it at all!


I'd recently watched a little child

Being pulled along by Mum

It came to me and even more

The little one's feet

Would be getting sore

And making them feel glum.


This might seem funny

As you read

That I worried for so long

After sixty years it came to me

That for every single step Mum made

For me was "two feet" long!

©G.C.Moore 2017

 



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I was doing a clean up in my study a while ago and found this bit of inspiration or perspiration I must have written a long time ago. Some of my reviewers felt like I needed to embellish the original short one verse poem more, so here you go! Can't decide what form this is. Maybe some of you smarties out there can help. Maybe I should have started my own contest, hehe.
Thanks to ftbtaxman for Graffiti Wall.
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