General Poetry posted August 16, 2017


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catty rondo (corrected)

Class of 62

by LIJ Red

Catena Rondo.
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Aging class members meet
at a diner outside of town,
as spurts of August rain come down,
we'll shoot da shit and eat.

At a diner outside of town,
as spurts of August rain come down,
waitress lugs tea pitchers around
at a diner outside of town.

As spurts of August rain come down,
We'll shoot da shit and eat.
Wave at the gang and grab a seat
as spurts of August rain come down.

We'll shoot the shit and eat
tall tales of great success are told
no one admits to being old
We'll shoot da shit and eat

Tall tales of great success are told.
There's tales of all that might have been
and how we'd do it all again
Tall tales of great success are told.

Nough! Time to wind this down!

There's tales of all that might have been
Aging class members meet
still in our prime, we all repeat
There's tales of all that might have been

Aging class members meet
at a diner outside of town
as spurts of August rain come down,
we'll shoot da shit and eat.




Catena Rondo.
No set meter.
Seems a little redundundant to me.
The GHS class of 62 had a mini-reunion Tuesday evening...
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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