General Poetry posted July 18, 2017


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Bamboo Pole Does Feel So Free

by danpald

Bamboo pole does feel so free
Bending with fish fighting string
Bright the eyes open wide
Bringing first fish in to fry

Sweet time to spend so free
Sun feels so warm to sing
Sounds of nature calmly
Seeking pleasure in the little heart

Vacation time at the lake
Visits from family feasting late
Vast the plates of fish well fried
Vision from the little fight

Clean the fish is next to learn
Cut the flesh with knife so good
Clearing insides with a shudder
Clever girl finds another


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