Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted May 19, 2017


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Heart Cold As Ice

by patcelaw



 
Her attitude was not nice
as her heart was cold as ice
one day when life was dim
her heart was melted by Him.

Many times she would fall
then He made her stand tall
He thawed that icy heart
and gave her a new start.

Now we know she is nice
tho her heart had been like ice.


-Patricia Lawrence
5-19-17



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