Horror and Thriller Fiction posted April 19, 2017 |
Fell down a crevice
Don't Ski in the Dark
by HarryT
Blackness, sinister and foreboding, saturated the icy cold dawn. The roaring wind cascaded deep into the isolated valley. What happened? I'm freezing. Damn it. I shouldn't have been skiing on the mountain after dark.
I move, pain ravaging the left side of my chest. I push on my rib cage greater agony erupts.
"Broken ribs, I bet."
I search my pockets.
"C'mon cell phone work... Damn, it's dead."
I fear my fate.
Is that a dog barking?
"Here! Here! Please, I'm down here in the crevice."
Begin This Story writing prompt entry
Blackness, sinister and foreboding, saturated the icy cold dawn. The roaring wind cascaded deep into the isolated valley. What happened? I'm freezing. Damn it. I shouldn't have been skiing on the mountain after dark.
I move, pain ravaging the left side of my chest. I push on my rib cage greater agony erupts.
"Broken ribs, I bet."
I search my pockets.
"C'mon cell phone work... Damn, it's dead."
I fear my fate.
Is that a dog barking?
"Here! Here! Please, I'm down here in the crevice."
I move, pain ravaging the left side of my chest. I push on my rib cage greater agony erupts.
"Broken ribs, I bet."
I search my pockets.
"C'mon cell phone work... Damn, it's dead."
I fear my fate.
Is that a dog barking?
"Here! Here! Please, I'm down here in the crevice."
Writing Prompt In no more than 100 words write the beginning of this story. Your entry must start with these two sentences or it will not count: Blackness, sinister and foreboding, saturated the icy cold dawn. The roaring wind cascaded deep into the isolated valley. NOTE: Although I listed this as horror, any genre is okay. Write your story as war, romance, horror, mystery, or whatever else floats your boat. NO POETRY! Just have fun with it! |
Always beware, don't ski or climb a mountain at night.
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