Romance Poetry posted April 11, 2017


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Her Meaningful Friendship

by Jim Lorson Sr


I have prayed to God
He knew I was in trouble
my heart was destroyed
happiness has lain dormant
a soul without any fire

then

she enters my life
my heart skips a beat or two
my stomach flutters
butterflies flitting around
has me excited with life

while

her touch settles me
those butterflies still persist
as they continue
to make me feel great about
what our friendship means to us

as

her beauty rocks me
her inner beauty shows me
how caring she is
our emotions run quite deep
our bond~~~undeniable

now

no one can ever
come between us; it's that strong
loving each other
makes our lives more bearable
as friends go, we are soulmates




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just some thoughts and feelings about our friendship.

thanks to all for reading this,,,,,,,jim

thanks to Kathy Schipper Art for the use of her artwork.
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