General Poetry posted March 16, 2017


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The Crooner

by RodG

The Life He Almost Lived Contest Winner 
There was a time I really thought
a crooner I would be someday.
I'd steal the fans Sinatra had.
They'd swoon because i sang my way.

The crooner can caress a phrase,
give life to lyrics, grab one's heart.
If he is good, the song's soon HIS
and number one on every chart.

But foolishly I stretched my range
an octave higher than Damone,
or Vale, John Gary, Orbison
when I was born a baritone.

My vocal cords would not respond.
I lost vibrato, sang off key.
And though I strove to save my voice,
no one enjoyed, not even me.

I love the crooner's special style
of reaching for that distant note.
Oh, I regret the damage done
when I did not protect my throat.


Writing Prompt
Many people talk about what they wanted to do with their lives... what they should have done, the lives they almost lived. Write a poem that captures this.

The Life He Almost Lived
Contest Winner


The photo is courtesy of Google images.

Crooners are male vocalists with beautiful voices. Most of the legendary ones sang pre, during, and post WWII right through the 60s. They were extremely popular and often are remembered for a signature song. For example, Frank Sinatra's is "My Way" while who can for get Nat King Cole's version of "Unforgettable."

Crooners mentioned in the poem were popular in the 50s and 60s:
Vic Damone ("On the Street Where You Live"), John Gary ("Danny Boy") and Roy Orbison ("Crying" and "Pretty Woman").

It is very easy to "crack" one's voice like I did by straining your vocal chords and singing too much.
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