General Poetry posted March 11, 2017

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tangents of the truth

All Most Taken In

by giovannimariatommaso

scorned by a spurious lover
Mickey crumpled
falling to the floor cross legged
& cried
in silence he sat shaken
he moaned
he groaned
as he died bit by bit
he fell into the vortex
swirled swiftly to its point
only to awaken & rise
from the death of demise
which taunted & grasped at him
flayed & splayed his life before him
& as suddenly as Mickey cried to die
he awoke from the stupidity of it all

Faith Poetry Contest contest entry

Feelings & emotions of passion that are tangents of the truth, will lead one to stray & bemoan their situation seeking an easy way out; instead, of confronting & absorbing the pain of the cross that by which they bear in life, in the life of faith unto life.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.

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