Fantasy Poetry posted February 3, 2017


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Kyrielle Sonnet

For a Dream

by Luna


I felt you behind me; you can't trick me, Mini-Me!
The night sky sometimes makes me swoon,
while in my bed under the moon.
My Luna sends me a moonstream ~
I bundle moonbeams for a dream.

Sweet fairies always grace these rays ~
while they sing their moon-fairy praise.
Nocturnal creatures share their gleam.
I bundle moonbeams for a dream.

The moon protects world and its dreams,
Our Mother Moon, the nighttime queen,
cool water flowing ~ lunar stream,
I bundle moonbeams for a dream.

Night's wonders sometimes make me swoon ~
I bundle moonbeams for a dream.



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A Kyrielle Sonnet consists of 14 lines (three rhyming quatrain stanzas and a non-rhyming couplet). Just like the traditional Kyrielle poem, the Kyrielle Sonnet also has a repeating line or phrase as a refrain (usually appearing as the last line of each stanza). Each line within the Kyrielle Sonnet consists of only eight syllables. French poetry forms have a tendency to link back to the beginning of the poem, so common practice is to use the first and last line of the first quatrain as the ending couplet. This would also re-enforce the refrain within the poem.
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