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Free verse with rhyme ~ is time real?

A chapter in the book Way Out There

Bending The Fabric of Time

by BeasPeas

Time and its dimensions. Contest Winner 

'Way Out There' ~ #7-396-B

Do I live in the now,
she mused ~

or only within my mind?
Can I conjure up the Big Bang,
bending the fabric of time?

Infrared heat holds the phantom
of where I once placed my feet,
and in slow motion, I see
where I've walked along the street.

She continued ~
If I consider for a moment,
when sharing a lover's kiss,
how quickly clock's hands tick;
compare then,
she challenged ~
how slowly hours pass
when I'm not with the one that I miss.

I don't think we are real,
she said ~
and after she explained it all to me,
I agreed.
Time stretches and folds,
twisting and turning to fool us.
We only just live in our head.


Marilyn D.F. Boire ~ December 27, 2016
"Way Out There'




 

Writing Prompt
Time has many dimensions. Blending rhyme with free verse tell the reader where, on occasion, time takes you. Artwork ok. No graphics or music.

Time and its dimensions.
Contest Winner


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