Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted October 22, 2016


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Savoring Innocence

Bursting Bubbles

by DonandVicki

senryu Contest Winner 
Innocent babe
bursting iridescent bubbles
dancing and laughing

Writing Prompt
17 syllables or less. Short-long-short. Artwork ok.

senryu
Contest Winner

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This subtle senru is all about fleeting innocence, it pops like an iridescent soap bubble. All too soon, we grow up and have to face the "real" world. If only we could regain that sense of childlike freedom, that lack of worldly knowledge.
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