Humor Poetry posted September 18, 2016


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a Rondeau Redouble-contest entry & poem #18 for Sept's 30/mo

Sexy Bird

by Dawn Munro

The author has placed a warning on this post for sexual content.

~ Sexy Bird ~


The peacock is a show-off kind of bird,
parading iridescence with such pride.
The male will sing a song that's quite absurd
in order to secure his peahen bride.

But also, to make rivals move aside,
he dances, while still hoping he is heard
so lovely, little peahen grants him ride.
The peacock is a show-off kind of bird.

The peahen must choose wisely when she's stirred.
Her mate provides the traits that must abide
in offspring, so good quality's preferred.
Parading iridescence with such pride

is how she judges what the bird might hide.
I wonder if there's ever been a word
discovered that could help a man who lied?
The male will sing a song that's quite absurd,

but females have good sense, and they've conferred,
and told each other how the men have died
who wouldn't see a flirty gal deterred
in order to secure his peahen bride.

There's not a lot these peacocks haven't tried.
They think the lines of decency are blurred.
But peahens strut and take things in their stride,
just biding time - their crime will be demurred.
The peacock is a show-off.


Peacocks also photo 70c5fa438ceb2725d9b2552655133a3c1_zps5jjuavah.gif



Rondeau Redoublé contest entry


Joy Graham, Robyn Corum and Beas Peas (aka Marilyn) are all participating in the September poem-a-day with me. You'll love their poems! Give them a read, and thank you for reading mine.

The Rondeau Redouble is a development of the Rondeau. Like that form, it is written on two rhymes, but in five stanzas of four lines each and one of five lines. Each of the first four lines (stanza 1) get individually repeated in turn once by becoming successively, the respective fourth lines of stanzas 2,3,4 &5. That can be represented as - A1, B1, A2, B2, b,a,b,A1, b,a,b,B1, b,a,b,A2, a,b,a,B2, b,a,b,a,(A1)

That all sounds a bit confusing, but if you note carefully, you will see how each line of the first stanza makes an appearance, in order, later in the poem. Then the first half or part of line 1 must come back as the final short line.

The trick is to make sure you choose two suitable rhymes to begin with or you will really struggle. You need about 10 different words with each of the two rhymes!

Best of luck if you decide to give it a try!

Video courtesy of YouTube. The audio is a little strange, but I chose this video for the wealth of information - even more, for the beauty of the birds that was captured (the glamorous things)!

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