General Poetry posted July 2, 2016


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Sonnetino

I Promise

by dejohnsrld (Debbie)



I promise love for you will always last
as etched in stone my love for you is cast.
I gently water you, bare soil  now past.
        My water bill was not much of a thrill,
      
it's worth it all to see you growing still .
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I have lived in my house almost 30 years and am determined to get grass to grow in my front yard this year. I keep seeding and watering, and i think it is working.

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