General Poetry posted May 23, 2016


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Winters Sundown

by l.raven

winter night awakes
and silence consumes the day
fire lights up the sky

sundown cinema
extinguishes blazing flames
stunning picture show

breathe deep in delight
and feel the chill of twilight
winter's day sundown
 



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Hi all !!!...yes !!! Here I am again late. Sorry guys. This is for the weeks fire challenge. LOL.

The picture was taken by my friend Donatta's daughter Audrey Folk. She is a wonderful photographer. And is going to college to be a pro. Thank you Audrey for the amazing picture of Sundown. This is the neighborhood I used to live in. Beautiful nights there. xxoo
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