General Poetry posted April 28, 2016


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Description of the beginning of life

Life In A Chamber

by Jonadab Ezerie

Naked and deep in my secret chamber
Trying not to wake from my peaceful slumber
I may be called a solitary stranger
I may be confined but not in danger

Every day, I felt safe with love to keep warm
Sleeping, eating, kicking was my daily norm
Truth be told, my life began at conception
 And sometimes I kicked to get some attention

My toes or my thumb? I need a magnifier!!!
When I am bored, they become my pacifier
 When I pass gas, it sounds like thunder
Scare me and wakes me up from my slumber

Why I am here,  I can’t quite remember
I guess it happened on a cold day in December
The force of nature is coming my way
Will my fears about the world fade away?

I’m getting bigger, and my days are numbered
And the truth about me has been uncovered
Nature says my nine-month lease was up
And it tells me Its time for me to drop

I wanted more time, but time was not on my side;
My walls are closing in, and I can no longer hide
Moments of joy at the first look of my head
I cried because I’m out in a world I dread

Maybe nature knew I felt like being kicked out
Maybe; it knew I had a good reason to pout
Maybe; it gave me something to cry about
Yes, I loved my life in a chamber.



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The poem is about the experience of a fetus in the womb from the perspective of the unborn child. The subject matter of the poem revolves around the feelings and sensations of the fetus as it grows and eventually prepares to enter the world.

The poem is simple, reflecting the innocence and naivety of the unborn child. Using the first-person perspective allows the reader to empathize with the fetus and understand its experiences.
The poem is about the experience of an unborn child in the womb, from the moment of conception to the anticipation of birth. The poem explores the fetus's emotions, sensations, and fears as it grows and prepares to enter the world, ultimately reflecting on the bittersweet transition from the familiar safety of the womb to the unknown of the outside world.
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